My love story
2010-07-14 @ 15:07:20
I tell you story, about my love
This girlfriend I knowed a flew years ago
She has name Sarah
We are talking together a lot of
My deceitful friend shows her me
Loves her, so and I fall in love too
I was lerating about her my friends and my familars
a lot of, too much

I did harm onself
You knew, this women
Your chldren’re learing her in School

You liked her too
You know her better than me
before it were different

You has got a lot of happines

You remember
I love her still althought I was have to working
much more than you

I thinking why
I’m frighttendent
when I’ll want kiss her
When I’ll want touch her
I’ll bring closer

Jonathan Kaczmrek

uhh, you made some mistakes, I'm too lazy to correct them for you now. It's hard to understand what you've writen here ._. ...
I'm agree with ddante. Please,check your note and try to find this mistakes and correct them. Maybe not here, maybe in the another note. It's a good exercise, believe me. :)
:) I don't udestand this text.
Thank you for suggestions

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